yeah, you're good at writing, my favorite part was the spirits chant, nice rhymes. What are your inspirations? i see you like a lot the social criticism thing. What do you like? The news, politics, history like war and such... do you know about secret societies? Illuminatis, freemason and such? What do you think about religions?
KhaosKitsune617
Damn. The attempted rape scene made me scared.
CIEIRMusic
It's the reason why I put it as rated M. That said, if you think that's scary. This took place, when they were just beginning to go insane. Whereas the main story of the lore takes place after they crossed that border of insanity.